Dreams of the Future
(- All resemblances to the present situation are purely coincidental!)I think perhaps one day, when I am old,and mourning children play in fetid alleyways,a drunken troubadour may sing some soft,...
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I think the first stanza is just terrific, as is the complete poem. I enjoyed the reading so much, and I appreciate the sadness and its cause. Thanks for sharing this...Angel
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Thank you very much, Angel. I wrote it some time ago, but much of the imagery seemed appropriate to events today.Davie
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Davie:fortunately for me i decided to read this aloud first.the strawberry words tumble freely from a basket tipped at justthe right angle to keep them from bruising.tight craftsmanship.worthy...
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Thank you Ben, for these deliciously delphic comments. I'll treasure them!Davie
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*wow!*I like this very much indeed I could feel the dusty wind and hear the echo of the note - superb imagery."Idiot, n. A member of a large and powerful tribe whose influence in human affairs has...
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Thank you so much, Valoe, for your kind words. The imagery came first, the ideas - such as they are - came afterwards! I'm not at all sure that's the most productive way round! I think this one needs...
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sure its the right way round Davielook what you did with itlike a dream .. the image comes firstthe words to show it followwell done ^_^Secret
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Thank you for these words, Secret - they're very encouragingDavie
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